Innocence Is Death - Comments

I really like this piece, it's interesting on many levels.

I like to imagine a dejected, possibly twisted character behind this, similar to that of Mrs Havisham (Great Expectations; Carol Ann Duffy - check them both out) or someone of a similar vein.

Solid work, keep it up :)

Interesting poem.
I like the way you worded it and the metaphores and all that you used.

i love your metaphors whenever i find a poet that writes with metaphors like that i just can't help but smile

my interpretation is... I suppose that we'll all liars, some admit & accept it, some don't. So make your mark and make it quick, because the world doesn't give you much of a chance.
I don't know. I feel like it's so much more than that but I can't so much explain it.

That's deep.