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  • Sinuzaki

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    This is amazing!^_^ It actually reminds me of this book I read at the beginning o.o
    October 15th, 2010 at 03:49am
  • Fantasy Monroe

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    Wow,
    that was really amazing and beautiful.
    Amazing poem :)
    October 10th, 2010 at 07:19am
  • AmorarEsDeVivir

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    I love the rhyme scheme, the rhythm, the flow. There were a couple lines where the flow felt a little interrupted, but the message was sweet. =) And I love how it comes full-circle in the end, bringing the story back to pictures in the stars. Beautiful. =)
    October 10th, 2010 at 06:49am
  • eviesays.

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    Wow, that's really... I don't know. It made me smile. XD
    Heart-melting, I guess? It's really great. (:
    August 23rd, 2010 at 12:59pm
  • Isadora Pierce

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    This is pure gold here. It reminds me of a little summer romance. So dreamy and sweet.
    July 26th, 2010 at 01:05am
  • pepper potts.

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    Wow. I really like this poem.
    You are very talented with writing!
    :)
    December 12th, 2009 at 07:33am