October 13th, 2007 at 05:52am
I Fear... - Comments
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Awesome poem, my favorite line is 'I fear I'll never get to touch your face just like lovers do.'October 10th, 2007 at 12:29am
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[i] I'm commenting again
Bits I loved the most:
[b] I fear I'll never get to touch your face just like lover's do
And maybe for a second my life will be just like the movies
We'll have our own 'they lived happily ever after'.
and even though I never saw you
and never got the chance to hold you for a second
I still love you
and I would die just to see you[/b]
Hey, everyone....
This girl makes me live each day[/i]October 9th, 2007 at 11:52pm -
[i] Omg
I really don't know what to say. That's rare......
And .....wow
Oh my god, sugar, you're making me cry. You wrote that for me?
Oh.....I feel so loved
I wish everyone else was like you. I want to meet you too
And don't you ever worry because you won't loose me.
You'll always have all of me.
Wow.
I'm printing this
I lvoed the way you explained your emotions...I feel the same
Wowsiness
I love you so much, and I'm gonna hurt anyone who says it's not real, because it is.
Ily
I mean it.
I have never felt this way before ever
Everyone
I love this girl too much to say[/i]October 9th, 2007 at 11:48pm -
Wow, this is really good.
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"For once I wish you'd look me in the eyes and tell me I can do this."October 9th, 2007 at 04:38am
I printed and made people read and several people including Mrs Woodwork, Bliss, Lauren and Mrs Makin loved it.
I do too. I read it before I go to sleep, it's beautiful