I Fear... - Comments

  • Oh Franklin!

    Oh Franklin! (100)

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    I am commenting again cause I love it so much
    I printed and made people read and several people including Mrs Woodwork, Bliss, Lauren and Mrs Makin loved it.
    I do too. I read it before I go to sleep, it's beautiful
    October 13th, 2007 at 05:52am
  • My_Paper_Wings

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    Awesome poem, my favorite line is 'I fear I'll never get to touch your face just like lovers do.'
    October 10th, 2007 at 12:29am
  • Oh Franklin!

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    [i] I'm commenting again

    Bits I loved the most:

    [b] I fear I'll never get to touch your face just like lover's do
    And maybe for a second my life will be just like the movies
    We'll have our own 'they lived happily ever after'.

    and even though I never saw you
    and never got the chance to hold you for a second
    I still love you
    and I would die just to see you[/b]

    Hey, everyone....

    This girl makes me live each day[/i]
    October 9th, 2007 at 11:52pm
  • Oh Franklin!

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    [i] Omg
    I really don't know what to say. That's rare......

    And .....wow
    Oh my god, sugar, you're making me cry. You wrote that for me?
    Oh.....I feel so loved
    I wish everyone else was like you. I want to meet you too
    And don't you ever worry because you won't loose me.

    You'll always have all of me.
    Wow.
    I'm printing this
    I lvoed the way you explained your emotions...I feel the same
    Wowsiness
    I love you so much, and I'm gonna hurt anyone who says it's not real, because it is.

    Ily
    I mean it.
    I have never felt this way before ever

    Everyone
    I love this girl too much to say[/i]
    October 9th, 2007 at 11:48pm
  • Feeling Failure

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    Wow, this is really good.



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    "For once I wish you'd look me in the eyes and tell me I can do this."
    October 9th, 2007 at 04:38am