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  • What's in a name?

    What's in a name? (100)

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    It’s supposed to have an irrational and insane tone to it. But perhaps some of it are a little bit to disjointed Sorry
    October 10th, 2007 at 05:36am
  • deadly marquee

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    okay just one thing. Just try to organize your thoughts a little more. It seemed a little foggy in some parts. Of course if thats what you were going for its awesome
    October 10th, 2007 at 01:18am
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