November 24th, 2009 at 07:06am
I really like the ryhme scheme in this poem; it's very effective when you use the repetition to build up the whole atmosphere, with the recurring 'mirror, mirror'. Overall a lovely piece; well done, you should be proud of yourself.
One thing: 'Tell my who/Will save us all?' should probably be 'Tell me who/Will save us all?'
thanks :)