The Innocent Voice Within - Comments

That totally played out in my mind's eye, it was awsome!

Hmm. Fantastic poem! :) It reminds me of Yami Bakura from the anime Yu-Gi-Oh, and I can imagine him writing this and sending it to a young girl for some reason... :)
Good job writing this! :)

This... fits my situation in life so well right now. Wow. Thank you for taking my thoughts and putting them into coherant words. xD This is brilliant. So true. So harsh. But so helpful. <3 This is amazing.