The Innocent Voice Within - Comments

  • EveSinSpookell888

    EveSinSpookell888 (100)

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    That totally played out in my mind's eye, it was awsome!
    July 4th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • TheCoreysGirl

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    Hmm. Fantastic poem! :) It reminds me of Yami Bakura from the anime Yu-Gi-Oh, and I can imagine him writing this and sending it to a young girl for some reason... :)
    Good job writing this! :)
    April 5th, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • all for believing.

    all for believing. (150)

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    This... fits my situation in life so well right now. Wow. Thank you for taking my thoughts and putting them into coherant words. xD This is brilliant. So true. So harsh. But so helpful. <3 This is amazing.
    November 23rd, 2009 at 07:45pm