This Time It’s Farewell - Comments

  • deadly marquee

    deadly marquee (100)

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    i love the way you write. Its lyrical and sweet and rhythmic. good use of writing techniques such as personification and metaphore.
    October 12th, 2007 at 01:05am
  • What's in a name?

    What's in a name? (100)

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    Thank you :D. No worries, I will always keep on writing.
    October 11th, 2007 at 11:16pm
  • Oh Franklin!

    Oh Franklin! (100)

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    Wowsiness

    I really, really like this. I love the way you portray emotions by personification, it's just amazing
    Keep writing.

    Bxxx
    October 11th, 2007 at 10:44pm