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Chaotic nightmare (100)

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<3 it

October 1st, 2011 at 03:10am

NicoleB. (100)

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I love this. Your rhyme is rather tasteful.

November 25th, 2009 at 06:41pm

SapharelyMissy294 (100)

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Its very good i like it

November 25th, 2009 at 05:45pm

TomMarvelloRiddle (100)

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yeah sorry my grammar isnt very good, but thank you :)

November 25th, 2009 at 05:09pm

stealthestars (100)

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"heart to broken to mend" should be "heart too broken to mend"
there's a couple other little mistakes but the poem itself is very good :D
~ danielle (:

November 25th, 2009 at 05:08pm