We The Imperfect - Comments

Ms.Doldrum (100)

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Wow. This is really great.

January 24th, 2010 at 09:10pm

Pretending Its Real (100)

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this is... amazing... im speechless...

January 18th, 2010 at 03:02am

ReinventLove22 (100)

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This poem is so closely what I stand for. They all want us to conform to their standards. Everyone must be flawless and identical. But we shal remain ourselves, never to let them pull us down.

January 16th, 2010 at 09:10pm

Wanderlust. (100)

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I love this poem, my favorite line is "We the imperfect are weary and worn, our hearts battle-stained, dreams dashed and torn."

January 15th, 2010 at 06:40am

just hollow birds (100)

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it has a good message. i like the on/off rhyming. it has its own beat, but nobody really needs a great beat when theres emotion and meaning.

January 4th, 2010 at 03:11am

username123456 (100)

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i love it! it's such a good message.

December 10th, 2009 at 10:59pm

Road To Heaven. (100)

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Ah-mazing! This poem is very true and has a wonderful vocab.

November 29th, 2009 at 06:55pm

it's_electric (100)

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yes, I agree with all the previous commentors. This is great. flows well, has a strong point. brilliant

November 28th, 2009 at 12:39am

SpangtasticCrap (100)

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:) Simple comment but, I like it :)

November 27th, 2009 at 11:40pm

keith s. (100)

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This was really quite good. Easy thoughts into complicated words.

November 27th, 2009 at 11:17pm