Realisation (Aged 18 - August 1997) - Comments

I love the actual sense of realization you put into it. I've had that realization quite a lot of times, with different circumstances.
I love the comparing to a butterfly, it flows and it's well...poetic, for lack of a better word.
Do you mind if I give this to a friend, she's been really down lately, and I think that this would cheer her up considerably.

Those last six lines were amazing, and reminded me of Abilana in one of my stories, even though things are perfect she will be ok, I loved it