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  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    amazing.
    you used simple words and rhymes to describe something so deep, that really cannot truly be expressed in any words.
    i like the comparision of dreams to stars; it's a different way of looking at the two seemingly intangible objects.

    i really love this poem.
    December 18th, 2009 at 07:03pm
  • victory

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    this is really good :] great imagery!
    December 14th, 2009 at 11:40pm
  • LouellaBelle

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    It's really beautiful. :)
    It's very imaginative yet still has total reality to it.
    Excellent!
    December 11th, 2009 at 12:06am
  • BrightBlue

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    I loved it. Made me feel like a little kid.
    December 10th, 2009 at 11:44pm
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