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  • Psycho_analysis

    Psycho_analysis (100)

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    Life is a drug that kills us all we die at somepoint why not end it all ...if this is a gift its like a snake in a box send it back without a second thought
    November 8th, 2007 at 05:39am
  • Psycho_analysis

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    mmm dont we all have that face inside... twisting and turning and not trying to hide...branding selfdoubt all over your heart ...wants to kill its precious host
    November 8th, 2007 at 05:38am
  • xXAtomic_TeenagerXx

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    wow! that says something(like ur teacher must really be boring) LOL but seriously keep on writing these are really good.
    November 4th, 2007 at 05:25am
  • shwayze.

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    Wow I like the flow and rhythm of it. Amazing wording too. Good job =]
    October 30th, 2007 at 09:20am
  • SaintEMber

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    I liked this! very good. I especially liked the title, it drew me in :D



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    October 18th, 2007 at 03:47am
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