them. - Comments

This was more raw than the rest of your stuff, more emotional.
It's amazing. The whole thing had shivers going down my spine, it's desperate in an almost fearful way.
[i]I'll never be them.[/i] Brilliant line.
It's so strong. Just... wow.

You were very good at describing the message.
It seemed like someone just wanted to fit in,
but was casted out, and that wasn't going to happen.
"I'll never be them"
gives you the sense that they've given up,
when you wanted them to keep trying.
Kind of like a story, where you think someone dies,
then all of the sudden they're alive.

I like this.

I agree with [b]mesmile,[/b] that is very powerful and strong.
I liked your wording and I can relate, in my own way, although I'm not all too sure what the meaning behind this could be for you, which makes it all the better.
I really like this one! (:

wow that is strong