wow i love the way its written, like its almost calming in its sadness but violent in its loss dont know if thats just me but that is how i felt while reading
I loved that poem, it reminded of a boy I once knew, thanks it brought back really good memoies, only really good authors who use real emotions can do that its awesom :D
wow that is really special.
I love how it all flows, especially the last part.
It's really beautiful.
I think it is so important to write about losing someone you love
This poem really moved me. I recently lost my auntie and I have to admit that this brought a lump in my throat and a tear to my eye. You say my writing inspires you, well you have written here what I have been struggling to say for a while now, thank you.