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  • Tessa the Undresser

    Tessa the Undresser (100)

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    i really like this
    i guess cause i can relate to parts
    but a bit of constructive criticism, lose the last lines, it makes the poem cliche
    December 16th, 2009 at 03:35am
  • Bloody Phang 16

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    It's beutiful :)
    December 15th, 2009 at 01:37am
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