Hell's Maidens - Comments

I....LOVE IT!!!!
God, you are gonna make one helluva novelist on day!

i loved the visionary in it..

<3

You can make the maidens sound beautiful and elegant and yet deadly and sinister at the same time. I love it. That's certainly a talent you've got there.

You are one of the only people who understand what a true poem is
A STORY!
You = one of my hereos


it was beautiful and gave a vibrate feeling to hell. Good Job. <3

[b]I really liked it. I like how you used lots of different words, and not just boring words. I like how it was sort of also like a story.

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That was an AMAZING poem.
The imagery was fantastic. ;D

This really drew me in because it was fictional and story-like. I loved the whole concept of the maidens from Hell.

You used description well and I could imagine the maidens vividly in my mind. My favourite line was probably [i]Their milky eyes, no pupils at all.[/i] I loved the wording and the descriptive words you used.

Also, the line [i]These corpses of ancient lore[/i] was a beautiful line, despite the disturbing words. It flowed nicely and again, I loved the wording.

I liked the fact that you didn’t make it rhyme for the sake of it.

[i]That's amazing. The angst of it all..Like Hell is quite friendly. Yet, feirce, like we have to watch our actions. Very well written, please write more.[/i]

Woa quite good, probably the second poem I've ever liked on mibba. You actually can write poetry unlikely everyone else around here.
I salute you poet!

Awesome piece of writing really enjoyable to read, the descriptions were amazing really beautiful. My favourite part -

"Their tresses are long and stained with blood,
And their eyes are a flashing gold."
Just amazing
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That poem WAWCKED! XD!

Damn that was fucking amazing. It was so visual, I had an exact picture of what was going on.

Your rhyming pattern was hard to catch onto at first, but very unique and it worked! Your word usage was perfect and beautiful. Damn, i loved it!!!

It was very beautiful.

Chilling and beautiful all at once. I love it.

longggggg, but so worth the read! it was amazing, u will be famous someday with ur writing, u WILL be famous