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  • poeticjustice529

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    absolutely amazing. ur realli talented and i love your work...never stop writting!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 11th, 2010 at 11:04pm
  • chaos_dave

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    Just beautiful. gorgous piece of writting. reminds me of the struggle i had to find myself.. and how ahrd it was to stop hidding behind a mask..
    December 23rd, 2009 at 08:39am
  • Smile You've Won

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    Wow. This was good! I loved the line, 'But uncovered something even more so in the process.' That was really good, I like it. :)
    December 20th, 2009 at 10:15am
  • emaciated idol

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    Wonderful. I liked the, "I'm eating you from the inside out" part.
    December 18th, 2009 at 11:53pm
  • OmegaForteX

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    amazing i thought i was in the poem the whole time
    December 17th, 2009 at 12:46am
  • memyselfandi

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    im liking this poem by you and thanks for commenting on mine although i dont think my new ones are that good still thanks anyway and ill add you as a friend.x.
    December 16th, 2009 at 06:01pm