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  • aye chica !

    aye chica ! (100)

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    Shit! I love this! Its so effing amazing!
    I especially love the last line "Pain strong but it won't last long" XD
    March 21st, 2010 at 05:48am
  • AngelfrmMyNightmare

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    Good poem ^_^
    Nice rhyming by the way, too.
    December 22nd, 2009 at 08:37am
  • Dakota13133179

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    Maybe you could call it something like "Shot Down" or "Pain Strong"
    December 21st, 2009 at 02:28pm
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