Double Suicide - Comments

This is exceptional. It's got a great rhythm and the flow is exquisite. It's a very inspirational piece and I think that, out of all the suicide poems I've read, yours stands alone. It is truly great. Well done!

Beautiful =)
I love suicide poems, so amazing ^^

this is a phenominal piece. i loved it! awesom rythm and all :-P

Ahhh <3 Amazing. You're the first person other than myself who I've found so far who actually rhymes and has good rhythm, not fifty thousand syllables one then then two the next line xD I love it.

Well done! Wonderful rhythm. You captured something very well in this. You've also inspired me to explore this topic in poetry. (I recently wrote a piece similar to this but now I'm seeing it in a different way - thank you for that)

Hypnotic. I Love it :)