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  • xKitsunex

    xKitsunex (100)

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    Once Again Really Really Really Good xxx Awsomenuss
    February 12th, 2008 at 05:21pm
  • warning-nimrod!

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    you're an awesome writer. :] can't wait for more poems!
    December 3rd, 2007 at 07:05am
  • Kara;SF

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    I like it.
    Although for the tune problem that you have
    maybe you should just sing it.
    See what comes out, yeah know?
    ...not to mention it's always really fun.
    I did it with this and it made me smile.

    haha :]


    Yeah and this part was pretty much amazing

    [I]An eye for an eye,
    makes the whole world blind.
    So step back from your battle,
    let it wash away with the tides.[/I]


    Kara.x
    November 18th, 2007 at 10:19am
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