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  • Cross.My.Heart...

    Cross.My.Heart... (100)

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    you are very good at rhyming and creating a sense of rhythm in your poems; one tip is that you should put each following line on a new line.
    January 30th, 2010 at 09:21pm
  • TeChnoKaT

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    this isn't horrid!!
    its really good
    December 31st, 2009 at 10:48pm
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