Face to Death - Comments

i love the sounds of this poem. the fluidness of it. you're from mexico? god, i can't write like that in spanish. hell, i can barely keep a B in that class. lol.

Inahle the scent of stone tombs declaring your fate
A sign, an orphan bled to stay, now kiss your lovers life away
The winds mopping the rotten corpse on her grave

thats my fav. part..i like how the description gives you a realistic sense of death..

This is amazing. It gives you the actual sense of death, I love it : )

Brilliant.

This is brilliant; it's very descriptive and chilling. You did an incredible job.

I wish I had the poetic sense you do.
You make me jealous.
This was a really good poem.
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[b]Wah. I liked this. It's intense. I don't think I've read anything like this.[/b]

That is so haunting, it's beautiful in a really creepy way. And the repetitive use of Mine Eyes Dazzle?

Exquisite.