Death by Lies - Comments

this is simply breathtaking.

wonderful rhyming, and a great flow.
Alot of the lines I could quote as the ones that stood out, so I re-read it a few times.

[i]heaven here
devil's near
angel wings[/i]

The imagery from these words really grabbed me.
Well done!

Nice flow
Rhyming has a nice ring :)

I like this...I can't really tell you why though. It just catches me.