November 5th, 2007 at 08:48pm
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i like it. :]November 5th, 2007 at 10:19am
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I LIKEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! COME CHECK OUTMY POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!April 11th, 2007 at 05:55pm
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I like it, it rhymes :]April 5th, 2007 at 12:31am
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ya i dont cut either i wrote it for my friendApril 1st, 2007 at 10:18pm
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sweet.
HEY! i made a couple of [i][b]MINE[/i][/b] rhyme! i loved it and feel the same...strangely...i dont cut. but i sure as hell get close!April 1st, 2007 at 09:49pm -
this is ace!!!!!! i like it!!!March 24th, 2007 at 02:07pm
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hehe thanksFebruary 24th, 2007 at 05:47pm
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i like this poem, good job! not many ppl make it a point to rhyme which is annoying so cool that you made it rhyme ^_^February 24th, 2007 at 07:36am
well, you can add in more imageries.. more symbols so it would get me thinking instead of telling me straight what you're trying to say..
overall, it is alright!