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BaeleePie (100)

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This is quite good, but watch your vocab, it's level may hinder you from connecting with a wider audience.

January 28th, 2010 at 08:39pm
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lots of sophisticated words I3 I like eet! its gewd i just love it xD its different and nothing like i have ever read before :3 its gewd i promise ^^

January 26th, 2010 at 09:12pm
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I love the use of vocabulary in this poem. It was good, keep it up.

January 26th, 2010 at 05:36am

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