So Much For So Less. - Comments

  • Fred Lero.

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    I love this one. Short but wonderful. It says a lot about love. xooxx
    February 24th, 2008 at 09:57pm
  • Totally Spaced

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    It all comes down to a sunrise on the east side will u be there to carry me home!!
    best song .. i love it ashleyy BECAUSE i can toatally relate and i love the song
    December 4th, 2007 at 09:01am
  • Clowns.

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    Beautiful yet sad.
    A wonderful poem, which would make a great chorus.
    November 28th, 2007 at 07:45am
  • the surgeon.

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    this poem really reflects what goes through someone's mind when they're in love, and not sure that they should be. You worded it very nicely and you expressed it well.

    I liked the last question at the end. It made sense..well, the whole poem does. I like this lots.
    November 6th, 2007 at 12:17am
  • The Master

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    This is lovely. Just lovely.

    I would quote it all but I think that would be just silly.

    Just try imagery, I think that you would have some really vivid and gorgeous images tucked away.
    November 5th, 2007 at 12:35am
  • the dream maker.

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    Agreed. You're a great poet. The repetition in this poem is nice, it's not annoying unlike some I've attempted to write, haha. Good job, I like the wording.
    November 2nd, 2007 at 02:20am
  • Munch.

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    i love it..i agree with Jinx_Luckystar i think it would make a wounderful chorus for a song.
    October 26th, 2007 at 09:54pm
  • Jinx_Luckystar

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    The repetition in this is beautiful. It would make an excellent chorus for a song. you are real talented you know.
    October 26th, 2007 at 08:36pm