It all comes down to a sunrise on the east side will u be there to carry me home!!
best song .. i love it ashleyy BECAUSE i can toatally relate and i love the song
this poem really reflects what goes through someone's mind when they're in love, and not sure that they should be. You worded it very nicely and you expressed it well.
I liked the last question at the end. It made sense..well, the whole poem does. I like this lots.
Agreed. You're a great poet. The repetition in this poem is nice, it's not annoying unlike some I've attempted to write, haha. Good job, I like the wording.