Why did I fall in Love with You? - Comments

This one's really beautiful too :)
I can't relate much, but I really like it.

"Even though you're away from my side
I'm just praying you'll be happy for eternity

No matter how lonely I may be..."

This one is truly beautiful. The repetitive feel to it works really well and enhances the ryhme at the beginning of each stanza. It's really good. (:

Nice too :)

You weave words with less of a solid foundation, but more of an artistically driven way. Less structure, and so more emotion. You connect with your writing :)

i understand how you feel in the poem. your a wonderful writter, i loved the fact i was able to relate to ur poem. fantastic job!