Without you. - Comments

Wow. Wonderful use of word, really well written and very powerful.
Well done

you're really good :D that was a powerful poem! amazing

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Not really a comment but you need them :hug:[/b]

So sad. But really nice use of words.

[i]Without you i'll die
I'll never survive this pain
so i'll just stay here by your gravestone
crying in the rain.[/i]

^ My fave lines right there. So beautiful, and created a precise imagine in my mind.

Really nice.