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  • Clowns.

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    Wow. Wonderful use of word, really well written and very powerful.
    Well done
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    November 11th, 2007 at 10:10pm
  • whatsername_

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    you're really good :D that was a powerful poem! amazing
    October 30th, 2007 at 03:02am
  • peter quill.

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    [b]:hug:
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    Not really a comment but you need them :hug:[/b]
    October 30th, 2007 at 01:07am
  • the surgeon.

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    Cry So sad. But really nice use of words.

    [i]Without you i'll die
    I'll never survive this pain
    so i'll just stay here by your gravestone
    crying in the rain.[/i]

    ^ My fave lines right there. So beautiful, and created a precise imagine in my mind.

    Really nice.
    October 30th, 2007 at 01:06am
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