Her - Comments

Jyzuru (100)

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this was a great poem. It seems like someone was reading it to me when i read it.

January 14th, 2010 at 09:11pm

Paper Gangsta. (100)

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Good job; I really like the storyline. The only thing I could say to improve maybe is to make your flow better. You switch between being really deep to being casual, if you know what I mean? But I think you did a really good job! :D

January 9th, 2010 at 04:04am

Mebeannmarie (105)

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very deep

January 9th, 2010 at 03:51am

I'm.Not.Insane. (100)

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Wow well written story.
=)

January 9th, 2010 at 03:48am