Slipping From My Sanity - Comments

  • Sheepy

    Sheepy (115)

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    The repetition of the title is pretty effective.
    I prefer poems like this where there isn't an apparently fixed rhyme scheme
    Nice work ;)
    November 1st, 2007 at 01:07am
  • Ns4_a

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    Dudess i like it giving me inspiration 4 the new chapter in my book where... you'll find out.
    October 31st, 2007 at 02:16am