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tron (100)

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the first three (or maybe four) lines are perfect
the second half is a little less compelling.

March 30th, 2010 at 11:16pm
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This is very well crafted and eloquent. I like your economy in words, and how the cadence and texture match.

January 11th, 2010 at 04:54am

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