I Remember Loneliness - Comments

Oh, I felt loneliness for a moment while reading this.
But, not to worry, that is a very good thing.
The ability to conjure true emotion with someone, just by them reading a piece by you, is a tue art.
And, I feel like you have just unconsciously perfected it. The words flowed with grace and knotted firmly within my heart as I was reading it, and that feeling stayed with me long after I stopped.
The 'I remember' theme weaved perfectly throughout, and the end made a soft, mental thud at the back of my head. It flowed well, and it ended soundly, and cannot stress enough how beautiful it is.

Well here is your 'reward' finally. I really enjoyed reading this and I felt like I could relate to it. Beautiful choice of words and I liked how each stanza started with I remember. Nice ending too. Good job :)

I love the wording and the darkness in it. And I love the story behind it and the meaning to it.
Beautiful.

Great poem, I really enjoyed reading it.

That's really great. The contrast of ideas in the 5th stanza was awesome. Nice xD.