Attention's Tension - Comments

This is really great, I couldn't stop reading it. I love how it flows perfectly and that it's short but absolutely perfect in length if you get what I mean. You can also really feel the emotion behind it and it creates emotion. Really great job, I love it.

Wow.
I've always been bad at analysing poems and explain why they make me feel something or nothing, so I'm just gonna say it:
This made me feel something. Like a tugging feeling in my gut. At first I get this cocky, sort of proud feeling, which sends a smirk to my face.
The next part sorta gets me deeper. There's still that proud feeling in me, but at the same time the words starts hitting harder. Like a light blow to the gut.
And then the last part just gets me in this trance. I forget that I'm reading words and just...place myself between the words.
Again, I have no idea why.
But one thing that I know, is that for me, the title fits. The tugging in my gut is probably the tension.
Great job, doll! I can't stop reading it. I have no idea why, but I can't. =)

I like this a lot. People like that bother the hell out of me and this poem is fitting for the situation. Good poem. :D