Do Not Read This - Comments

I love how you opened this with a biblical reference, and did so with a sort of skepticism in your words. This is also one of the few times I've been able to really appreciate poems that rhyme--generally they turn out with too many syllables or odd word choices and they sound forced, but this flowed really nicely.

Very good. Much better than any of mine.

Amazing. The last sentence was just wonderful.

that was really good. like, super fantastic. kudos, cool person. :D

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my evil plot works.

Haha Indeed You Do. Nice.

And you prove it purely by the fact that people disobeyed and read it.

this is awesometastical(:
add me? thanks yuu<3

this sounds really good...very interesting...i likeit..:)..