The Lovers' Tale - Comments

I can't say enough about this.. yet, I'm speechless. Wonderful Work!

For all the wonder of words, the majesty and utter power, none can do your work justice. 'Gorgeous', 'gripping', 'powerful', 'riveting', come to mind, but even they are hardly within the realm of beauty from which your work comes. Quite honesly I am in awe. It dances so easily across the mind as one reads it, never dropping the rhythm. A lovely tragedy done with such skill and effortless grace is a hard thing to come by, but I am so very glad to have found this.

This is amazing! i love it! Its a beautiful tale! i just love it!!! i cant say more! I love it!

um, how is this poem so bomb diggity? Like no joke, I am jealous of your skill. I happen to suck REALLY BAD at poetry, I mean hand me a pen and paper and I'll write a story about the way your eyebrows lift, but tell me to rhyme and you'll get "cat" and "hat" because I suck. and you don't. AND THATS AWESOME! you're cool. ahhaa. ok. I'm done.

Okay. So I've got a lot to say for this one:
1.0 I normally strongly dislike poems that tell a specific stpry like this. I uually hate them because I read so many poorly done ones and it really irritates me. They are hard to write and no one ever pegs them correctly.....
Except you. You have opwned my mind to poems like this and ypu have given me hope that there are other poets out there that can pull this off.
2.0 wow. Just wow. You have a brilliant writing style and I love the words and lines that you put together. Onething that is important for me when I read a poem is not that it has to rhyme, but it has to flow. The words rolled beautifully offthe tongue in this. I just loved how it sounded.
3.0 I love the story. I'm a hopeless romantic and I adore royalty 'stories', but once again most people cannot pull them off like you can. keep it up!
4.0 I loved the emotion and the meaning of the words behind the paper, or "computer screen". Things like this are a lovely surprise considering people slap together words most of the time and call it poetry.
Bravo! Keep writing and let me know when yoh post something so I can read it. I truly enjoyed this.
From one 'poet' to another,
love always,
ciao. Anna kate.

This one is great!!!! sad in its own way, but incredibly written =)

Inspiring beautiful, in every way :DD

inspire thats all ican say u totally inspired me to write more poems and to learn how to improve i also agree wiv the person below me <3

... ... ...I really don't know what to fucking say to express how good this poem is...cause whatever i'll say would be an understatement lol. Really...You're amazing at writing...I absoloutly love this poem

The begining was an amazing hook. good poem :D

whoaa this is amazing!!

-gasp-
this is deep... -gasp-
Very deep -I cant stop gasping! - =]

oh my... i do agree with person below. wow. this is... wow.

Strong wording! I'm impressed. It's very slow moving, but it works. I love the way you wrote it too, in the omnicient(sp) point of view.

Well done, my friend! Do tell me, though, what was the muse of this poem?