I like the effect the repetition of "Dead Angel" gives to the feel of the poem. The whole this is beautifully sad, heart felt a full of emotion. Very well portrayed, I say!
I like the rhyming and how you weren't afraid to go for the age old poem stereotype. It really adds to it and I rather enjoy that, even though it [i]rhymes[/i], it doesn't sound like Dr. Seuss. Awesome~! :)
I like the rhyming and how you weren't afraid to go for the age old poem stereotype. It really adds to it and I rather enjoy that, even though it [i]rhymes[/i], it doesn't sound like Dr. Seuss. Awesome~! :)