I greatly enjoyed the intensity in this poem and I can honestly say I am surprised with this entry. The rhyme scheme you have for this poem actually works without taking anything away form the poem itself.
May 22nd, 2010 at 02:15am
The rhyme really works for this poem, which is normally a really hard thing to do. I love the verse: "Chase your dreams,
Before they turn to nightmares.
Close the ruined seams,
Stitch before you become aware"