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  • False Illusions;

    False Illusions; (100)

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    I have one like this, I can totally identify.
    I really love it. (:
    February 6th, 2010 at 08:52pm
  • lies and lullabies

    lies and lullabies (100)

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    i love it :)
    February 6th, 2010 at 03:59am
  • Luvbytes

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    oooh this one was sorta like a slap in the face to who ever its about. I liked it! The last few lines were very very effective.

    You did a very good job of creating emotion in just a few simple yet direct lines and I think this peice has very universal appeal. Almost anyone can relate to this.

    Good job.
    February 5th, 2010 at 03:45am
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