No Voice, No Choice - Comments

this would be a awesome song! loved it.

i love your metaphors and the clash of emotions you have in all your poems i love this line "To stay, to exist, to bleed for nothing, and kill to eat"

I love your writing style,
another great poem=)

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Comment virginity...muhahaha.

This is a great song. I especially thought the first verse had a lot of feeling. The metaphors were really good too, like "offical parchment" and "chapters of your life." It just kind of really communicates really well with you when you read it.