I think this is the better poems of all the new ones you've wrote. (Those with short and simple sentences)
I like the beginning with Pain and then Despair, as you marked those 'key words' of the poem. great. :D
However, I'm a little confused... did you mean get 'rid' for the pain? Because you wrote 'read'. And I checked there was no real definition of 'Reid', except names.
I like the beginning with Pain and then Despair, as you marked those 'key words' of the poem. great. :D
However, I'm a little confused... did you mean get 'rid' for the pain? Because you wrote 'read'. And I checked there was no real definition of 'Reid', except names.