F*cking 'My Chemical Romance'... - Comments

Phantasmagoria. (100)

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This is really good
It's beautiful,it's like a painting only its made up of words
The ending is so sad,but meaningful
:)

December 24th, 2007 at 01:14pm

Flynn Rider (300)

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I like it :] Very wicked rad with the words... and the second to the last part -
that just touched me - seriously...

"Would you fake a smile if I'd scream you name."
Nice, touch! You're good - no lie!

November 23rd, 2007 at 07:06pm

yilujayss (100)

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[quote="DarkenedHearts"]Aww!
I love the poem. Its like reading a pessimist trying to be optimistic and it makes my heart break. Its really well written and I can see that you put alot of time into it. My favourite verse would be the one repeated throughout the poem. Its like a song.

Good JOB!

XoXo
Emmy[/quote]i agree with DarkenHearts, it's a good poem *nods*
i liked the repitition (spelling) in the poem as it made a stronger point kinda..yeah...:) good job!

November 20th, 2007 at 09:01pm

Heartstrings. (100)

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Aww!
I love the poem. Its like reading a pessimist trying to be optimistic and it makes my heart break. Its really well written and I can see that you put alot of time into it. My favourite verse would be the one repeated throughout the poem. Its like a song.

Good JOB!

XoXo
Emmy

November 20th, 2007 at 08:38am