This is good! Simple and short, but yet it it is very deep and full of emotion. I like how you give the readers room to add in a little of their own imagination. Wonderful!
I really like this. It reminds me of when I was in high school and their was this kid that i was completely in love with. Lets just say he was a jerk, and when he moved senior year i couldnt face being on campus, cause everything was about him. =/ tough love