I Blame Riley For The Way I Write - Comments

this is beautiful, easily my favorite of yours. I agree however, you need to eliminate some of the commas at the end of the lines (as I already stated in my comment to you.) This is great love, keep it up.

I’m not a fan of a comma after every line. To me, it creates a stilted sound. However, I did like the rain image and those last lines stand out and end on a stronger note, and it nicely ties back to the beginning.

Aww. It's sad. ): I really liked it though. (: This is actually the only poem I've read on this site. xD I'm not much of a poem reader, but I really enjoyed this. I like how it rhymes. ;]