I found this poem to be very well written with a beautiful rhyme scheme. You're a very talented poet and I look forward to reading more of your works in the future. I also have the feeling that I shall be revisiting this page. (:
THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!!!!!! you are soooo talented and the way you put your words together is very clever. i wish i could read more of your poems right now but i have to get off the computer. i will be reading them soon! wow im so glad i read this poem. fyi i will be reading this poem again lol very very very clever