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  • I'm Feeling Good

    I'm Feeling Good (100)

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    i was gonna say... i think your iambic pentameter is a bit off hahaha
    March 13th, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • hailey_bailey7

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    it was an assignment for english and we had to use iambic pentameter, but we could fall out 3 times which i did
    February 27th, 2010 at 08:34pm
  • InebriatedLover

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    I like this. metre isn't all that bad.
    although i hardly follow it myself.
    but this was decent. the inncocence
    was a delight.
    February 26th, 2010 at 04:01am
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