Wow, your poem is just beautiful
February 22nd, 2010 at 12:05pm
"You made me feel things that I never wanted to feel again.
I tried to pull my self out, but I just kept getting sucked in."
favorite lines!!
your a good writer, mabye try writing in a different ryhming pattern like abca abca, instead of abababa tho, i think it helps the flow of the poem. hope to read more of your poems!