Whoaa, that was amazing! Though, I agree With Qwerttmann, that would make an awesome story. Haha.
March 18th, 2010 at 02:36am
Interesting, this sounds like an excerpt from a story, and I think it may sound better in one. But it still wonderfully written and I had not a trouble getting a picture perfect image.
Not as emotional as poetry, but vivid and life-like like any other.
